Spider-Man
Spider-Man
Is that like a spelling correction? =3
Superbad.
Somebody just finished watching Superbad...
wow, you made a connection. HURRR DUURRRR
Umad?
Youmadbro?
lol
Ugh
5 for animation. Was great. -5 for the terrible Heath Ledger's Joker impression. Also to the VA: Read the script first before you narrate.
so u're sayin that u know the script better even u didnt read the whole script itself? woow, u're a real asshole thinkin that u're all good n experienced. get a life, stupid
Mouth noises distracting
This was a good piece of flash. I'm not a flash artist so I'm not going to comment on that part but I think your audio engineering could use some work. I really think you could have found better sound FX for when Neo was eating; it seriously sounded like either water was dripping into a bucket or you were over exaggerating open mouth chewing (When his mouth was animated to be closed). His chewing was also upstaging the action that was going on between the french guy and Morpheus. Its good to have sound in the background but not when it over-powers the primary action.
Hm, yeah, probably could've put more space between him eating and the dialog, or turned it down some. I'll look into it, thanks!
w00t
This wins.
Scoppdoggy - lol ur bad
Lol.
Um...Not really.
"According to U.S. History the figures themselves were rather the opposite. Grant drank heavily, Jackson was a slave owner, and Franklin was a womanizer."
What history book have YOU been reading?
I get my education from the internet, it can't be wrong.
Stop wasting the RRC's time
Sorry bro. This is a joke, and a very humorless one at that. I had high hopes when I watched the first chapter but now I don't want it to continue. Please request reviews from something you actually care about next time.
i'll assure you it isn't a joke. i need to find a better voice actor, and writer. well for chapter 5 me and my good friend decided to do everything our selves, and i hope you'll give us another chance. chapter 5 in my opinion is the best work so far. sure i might not be as good as adam phillips but i'm getting there.
Seems more like a joke
Eh, this one seemed a lot more like a joke than a serious flash. I mean, the voice in the opening credits through the mood way off kilter. The music also overpowered everything else in the rest of the flash. Sorry man, the first short was a lot better.
*Review Request Club* (I hate it when I forget that)
we didn't have a good program to convert the voice recording files so it ended up being slower than intended so our intro seems lagged. but we fixed that error. i know our earlier works aren't as good as my latest work. but i have vastly improved on my animation. i'm still a new artist and i'm still learning. so please don't let this past works make you give up on us. Chapter 5 which just came out, which you can check out on my profile is pretty awesome in my opinion. vastly improved.
-jaiba
Very short
Good animation, I like the ship fading. But I think if you would have titled this a teaser or a short I would rate higher. I'm liking the story though, I love that the antichrist is going to be an alien!
Well I'm a graduate of the Ohio Center for Broadcasting and I hated it there. I learned most about what I do (Video) from the Medina County JVS in Ohio. I have a degree in Multi-Media and Digital Design, as well as Video Engineering. I play the drums.
Age 37, Male
Student
Kent State
Akron
Joined on 3/11/08