Reported for using actual audio...
Is that like a spelling correction? =3
@SeanFury - stfu, you idiot.
@Zeurel - "Mine and my fiance's (Not being a nazi, just helping out :D )
Everything LOOKED nice but you could use some work on comedic timing. The jokes were there and got a smile out of me but I feel if they were a little more rapid fire they would have more of an impact. They almost felt like they lingered too long like you were trying to explain why it was funny. Also, I'm not sure if "breathe" was spelled "breath" for a reason but pronounced "breathe" so, small grammatical error there. Also the voice audio was over-modulated at points. Good work though, I've enjoyed the series so far and am only commenting because I want you to get better than you already are. Cheers :)
Somebody just finished watching Superbad...
wow, you made a connection. HURRR DUURRRR
Does it have a penis?
5 for animation. Was great. -5 for the terrible Heath Ledger's Joker impression. Also to the VA: Read the script first before you narrate.
so u're sayin that u know the script better even u didnt read the whole script itself? woow, u're a real asshole thinkin that u're all good n experienced. get a life, stupid
I just can't get into Newgrounds "Mind fucks" because they're all the same. The phallic bugs immediately took me out of it. The last thing you want to do if you want to be taken seriously is put a penis in any NG submission. Cause then you look like the other 90% of children on here whether the meaning is comedic or not.
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